I'm learning to do persuasive writing. Our topic is Should animals be kept as pets? In my opinion is yes they should. The easy part was persuading and the hard part is getting more ideas.
I strongly believe that animals should be kept as pets because they are your companion through your darkest times and your most lonely times. Secondly I believe animals should be kept as pets because they guide blind people to their home or shops. Finally I strongly believe that animals should be kept as because they protect you from other dangerous animals and people, also they are good friends to people that are always lonely.
Kia ora Ngapua my name is Emma and I am a year 7 student at Paihia Primary School. I like your blog about should animals be kept as pets what I think is yes. I liked the way you told us what you were learning about and why animals should be kept as pets I think the same. My question for you is why are you learning about persuasive writing?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ngapua my name is Deeny and I am a year 7 student at kawaKawa Primary School. I like how you told us what you were learning about in your writing and yeah:
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Tēnā koe Ngapua my name is Tawhiri and I am a year 8 student at Paihia school. I really like your short piece of writing about your opinion on having animals as pets. I agree partly with you because having pets is helpful and comforting but the animals may have families that we take them away from. This piece is a really good example of persuasive writing but perhaps you could add at the end of your piece this is the reason we should have animals as pets. This post reminds me of when I did persuasive writing about having pets but you did much better than me. Do you enjoy persuasive writing?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ngapua, my name is Katipa and I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I really liked your persuasive document on saying that animals should be kept as pets because you gave your audience ideas on why they should be treated with respect.
ReplyDeleteFor example you added “they protect you from other dangerous animals/people”. This also reminds me of a story I read because it says “they can guide blind people” and that’s exactly what it said in inside THAT story. What animal would you prefer mostly as a pet? How would you react if you love animals but they attack you? (Don’t answer it if you don’t want to) once again thanks for sharing this on your blog and hopefully you make more.
-Katipa